The Dare

The story line could be a good one. I am disappointed the way the sum of the book is laid out. as soon as i get enthralled in the story it is broken up when it doesnt need to be, thus, i feel as though my journey with Juliet and Dom was interrupted. And this continued. I am not satisfied with this method and i have decided i will stop at this book. i am not willing to put myself out there and finish the series. I feel that Ms. Darling took something that had the potential to be really good and chopped it up into tiny pieces when it was not necessary to do that. I was ready to became a new fan. i feel as though i have been taken advantage of. i am miffed as well has saddened. i avoid these types of books, stories and authors. i feel cheated of a good story as well as my money with this book. as the saying goes "fool me once..." no thanks. i would like a refund and to forget this book. i am pissed at myself for falling for this unecessarily divided book. a good story divides itself. pity

Expensive. Disjointed and not thoroughly thought through. The charasters are just thrust into the story, no background and they are not well rounded. The story is a good one but could have been written better. The whole thing feels rushed with too many sex scenes

I thought the last review was thoughtful and insightful however not 100% fair. Most E books that I read are chopped up into sections but that doesn't take away from the story which I thought was extremely romantic and had enough erotica to keep me reading. I enjoy a good alpha male book and story and the hotel Offers that with just the right amount of drama...